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Overwhelmed in Texas's picture

Once upon a time there was a lovely lady who met a handsome man...they fell in love and they married....everything seemed like it was going so well...they had so much fun together. One day there was a knock at the door and the lovely lady opened the door and there were two small children standing there. They were beautiful children, with big round innocent eyes and soft hair and as she gazed upon them she felt like they looked familiar... the boy child had a note pinned to his shirt..she reached down and took the note and read it...

It was written to the handsome man...it said, please take care of our children as I no longer can...

the lovely woman looked upon the innocent children and her heart bursting with love realized that these were the children of her new husband and she swept them up in her arms and took them into her home, calling to her husband to come quick....

...as she walked into the house, she felt the hairs rising on the back of her neck and looking back behind her she saw a pair of eyes were watching her from the dark forest, she shuddered and quickly shut the door behind her...

(alright, someone add to the story!)

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ittakestwo's picture

She realized then that her happy ever after would not be so happy, in fact those evil eyes watching from the forest were constantly watching. She found over time that those eyes could see and hear every thing they did, every thing they said, she began to realize her new life, with her new love would have no privacy...

Those innocent children grew as time went along and as they grew they became less innocent. In fact they became "messengers" for the evil eyes in the forest...

The lovely lady began to wonder over time, "just what I have gotten myself into...???"
It is what it is...

Empty Risks's picture

Hon, you might have something here. I can't even add to it now, as it's formulating in my head. I'll send you a message via email because this could have just started a great idea. No shit!

luvdagirl's picture

I wisH I had more of an imagination to add to this but if it were a real fairytale the lovely lady would run over the forest dwelling evil because she wasn't watching the road due to a hot and heavy make out session with her handsome gentleman and that would break the spell put on those children........ Or atleast that sounds like a fun ending when the evils last sight is that good!!!

Catch22's picture

But none the less the lovely lady adored her new husband and his beautiful children and her want to be happy and make them happy clouded the judgement of the lovely lady.

She gave them all she had, she cooked for them all, cleaned all their mess, washed their clothes and worked hard to pay for their schooling.

The lovely lady couldn't shake this horrible feeling she got everytime she opened the front door, but she just kept thinking she was crazy and and shut it out.

But then one day while outside with the children....

Catch xx
*Mean People Suck*

Cruella's picture

About a lovely lady. Who was bringing up 3 very lovely girls. All of them had hair of gold. Like their Mother. The youngest one in curls.

Here is a story of a man named Brady......Oh shit WRONG story!!!! Sorry.

I will have to come back and add to your story when I have had my coffee and can think better. Great idea!

patient but frustrated's picture

shut the door behind her...she quickly called new husband to tell him what she felt...shit LOL this could take me all day and go 50 million ways LOL LOL....A NOVEL idea Overwhelmed LOL

gertrude's picture

She noticed the boy and girl running off into the woods. They never went together, and never for a long time. But each would run off into the woods, and as they came back they began to laugh with less humor, talk with less interest, and listen with less attention. It seemed each time they returned some of the light had gone out of them.

Finally, the lovely lady thought to talk to the children to find out what was in the woods and how she could help...

happy's picture

them think for themselves, without all the evil that comes to being a STEP MOM.. She wondered why or what she could do differently to help these children love with no restraints. She wondered if they could ever love her as she loved them without all the hurt they bestowed upon her with the name of STEPmom.

As she pondered on how to make things at home wonderful for all, she seemed to be the one who was most miserable. Always making sure everyone elses needs were met, but sadly forgetting to meet her own needs. Putting all else above her and her health to try and make a
"home".

She came to the conclusion that....
Happy
"live life to its fullest everyday"

Little Jo's picture

For she realized she cannot fully love and help them grow without loving and helping her-self grow. Her home can only truely be a home, when she herself feels at home.
So she sent out word through the kind forest animals and before she knew it, she found friends who understood and together they helped each other. They would laugh and cry together and helped eachother grow stronger. Although they did dream about banning together to find all the Darkness and beat them until the sun shined, but they knew there was no evil in their hearts.

And so the story goes......

"May the forces of evil get confused on the way to your house." George Carlin

crazyhair123's picture

The woman sat the children at the table with cookies amd told them that their father was on his way. She went up stairs took all that she needed to leave the hell that her life could become, She was secretly wealthy and was on the verge of leaving the man any way because she wanted a family and he said he never wanted kids. So this gave her the push that she needed to run . She snuck out to the car left and lived happily ever after............as for the man and his children who cares *B*

laughterandtears's picture

That the lovely lady dug deep down in her heart, and realized that she loved the handsome man and together they began to work on a way to fix all that was wrong. Her forest friends where always there for her when she felt she couldn't go on and through time, tears and friendships, the lovely lady and the handsome man were finally sitting on their porch swing holding hands as they recalled the memories of yesteryear.

~THE EXERCISE THAT REALLY CHANGES YOUR LIFE IS WALKING DOWN THE AISLE~

Bonus Wife's picture

about the arguments they used to have in the "early" days...She especially enjoyed remembering the time she threw water in his face for defending evil eyes...but then, it hit her. If only they had realized then how precious life was...how material things they couldn't afford really weren't important --- the only real valuable thing they had was time and how they wasted so much of it by the constant fear and obsession of the unknown...

Cruella's picture

The lovely lady is face to face with the evil dark thing before her. The lovely lady whips out a mirror to make the Evil presence look at herself in the mirror. The Evil presence was so horrified at the sight of her own reflection that she ran away biting her face(that one is for you Catch) and screaming in horror. Her eyes burning from the horrible sight she just witnessed. She was never to be seen again. The lovely lady, the handsome man, and the innocent children that looked amazingly like the lovely lady, lived happily ever after....
The End

Anne 8102's picture

Can my story include lottery winnings in the billions?

~ Anne ~

"Love, having no geography, knows no boundaries."
(Truman Capote)